Building Blocks
"If you're obsessed with how it looks in the Finished Hour, you're not going to spend too long talking about how many drones we have. Drones are 0.3% of the Finished Hour. Commentary is 70%. Put your energy where it matters."
Building Blocks — Finished Hour Allocation
| Building Block | Finished Hour | Role |
|---|---|---|
| The Run | 55% | The primary block. The competitive race (men's & women's), the notables, and the backpackers. The soul of the show. |
| Commentary (overlay) | 70% | An overlay across the entire show. Voice, insight, storytelling, statistics. The most important creative investment. |
| Graphics & Data | 15% | GPS tracking, ghosting data, split times, 3D course mapping. Done brilliantly = unbelievable storytelling. |
| History | 10% | A century of stories, largely untold. Archive footage, legendary moments, the Fordyce Tap, great rivalries. |
| In-Race Stories | 5% | Live storytelling from the road. Runners with cameras. Course reporters. Real, raw, in the moment. |
| Back Stories | 5% | Pre-produced runner profiles. When they appear live, you already know their name. You already care. |
| Packaged Inserts | 5% | 140 pre-produced pieces: history, thematics, traditions, runner stories, geography. |
| Studio | 5% | Art-directed, purposeful. Not the old 80% model. Studio must earn its place. |
The Run
THE RACE
The competitive front of pack. Men's and women's battles for the win. Elite splits, tactical moves.
THE NOTABLES
Celebrities, public figures, green number runners, someone running their 51st Comrades.
THE BACKPACKERS
The everyday runners. The middle and back of the pack. The soul of the race.
THE SUPPORTERS
Families at the roadside. The child with a sign. The partner at the finish. The in-race human stories.
Commentary
The Voice of the Broadcast
Commentary is not describing what you see. It is telling you what to feel, what to understand, and why it matters. It runs across every building block. It IS the broadcast.
The single largest creative investment in the production. It overlays everything — The Run, the inserts, the studio segments. When commentary is right, every other block is elevated. When it is wrong, nothing else matters.
Graphics & Data
When data becomes story. Real-time GPS tracking of top 50 athletes, ghosting overlays comparing current pace to course records, split time analysis, 3D course mapping with elevation profiles. The graphics package transforms raw race data into narrative tension.
History
The broadcast's time machine. 100 years of Comrades stories woven into the live race. When the front-runners hit Fields Hill, the viewer sees Fordyce and de la Motte in 1983. When the gun fires at 12 hours, they understand a century of heartbreak. History is not decoration — it is the weight that makes the present race meaningful.
Full history insert library detailed below in Packaged Inserts section.
In-Race Stories
The unscripted moments. Course reporters embedded at key points along the route. Runners carrying their own cameras. The rawness of live storytelling — no script, no second take. When a runner stops to help a stranger, when a crowd erupts for someone they've never met, when the back-of-pack runners enter Pietermaritzburg with minutes to spare. This is where the broadcast breathes.
Back Stories
The bridge between pre-production and live broadcast. Filmed weeks before race day — at home, on training routes, with families. When these runners appear on the live feed, the viewer already has a relationship. They know the name, the reason, the stakes. Back stories turn 20,000 anonymous runners into people you are invested in.
Packaged Inserts
The full Packaged Inserts creative framework is detailed below — editorial principles, content libraries, sample scripts, trigger maps, and pre-production timelines.
Studio
The studio is no longer the centre of the broadcast. It is a punctuation mark. Used for expert analysis during key race moments, for medal cut-off countdowns, for post-race interviews. Every studio segment must have a reason to exist. If the director can achieve the same thing with a course reporter and a graphic, the studio is not needed.
Overview & Principles
What Packaged Inserts Are
Pre-produced, self-contained content pieces that live inside the live 13.5-hour race day broadcast. Not filler. Not interruptions. The emotional architecture of the broadcast — the moments that make a viewer put their phone down and feel something. They do what the live camera cannot: travel back in time, get inside a runner's head the night before, explain why a hill broke a record, make a child's face looking into camera tell the whole story of what this race means.
Duration Table
| Type | Duration | Use Case |
|---|---|---|
| Micro | 10–30 sec | Shout-outs, quick facts, single image with VO |
| Short | 30–90 sec | Tradition explainers, geography snapshots, history moments |
| Standard | 90–180 sec | Runner stories, thematic pieces, deep history |
| Feature | 3–5 min | Exceptional stories only. Rare. Must earn its length. |
The Pixar Principle
"We admire people not for what they accomplish, but for what they overcome."
Find the obstacle. Find the doubt. Find the moment of almost. Then — and only then — show us the crossing.
History is not dates and records. It is human beings under pressure. Geography is not hills and distances. It is the places where people's bodies and minds negotiated with each other. Traditions are not rules. They are rituals that carry meaning. Every insert must be rooted in a human being doing something hard.
The Parallel Storytelling Device
The most powerful use of history and geography inserts is the Trigger Map — a pre-planned editorial tool that links live race moments to moments from the past. As the broadcast approaches a known location — a hill, a town, a cut-off time — the director pulls the corresponding insert. The present race and the historical moment collapse into one. The viewer feels the weight of all the races ever run on this road. Every insert that can be paired with a live trigger point must be tagged in pre-production.
Production Tone Principles
- Narration is the primary voice. Warm, knowledgeable. Not a sports anchor. Not a documentary cliche.
- Music decided per insert. No blanket musical rule. Some inserts carry better in silence.
- Archival material: handle with reverence. Do not overlay with heavy graphics. Let old footage breathe.
- Modern inserts should feel cinematic. Wide lenses on hills. Close on faces. Slow motion used sparingly.
- If an insert makes the edit team go quiet, it is working. If it provokes nothing, it is not ready.
Soul Manifesto Reference
Reference the manifesto: "This broadcast is not sports coverage — it is a 14-hour act of witness." Link to the ten founding principles from the soul manifesto. Key values to embed:
- The North Star: Make viewers feel what participants experience
- South Africa At Its Purest: The road is the great equaliser
- The Soul of One Thousand: Balance massive scale with intimate storytelling
- Three Emotional Pillars: Heroism, Pride, Hope, Future
- Our Obligation: Stories shape what societies believe possible
Full manifesto: tandw.dev/comrades-2026/soul-manifesto
Master Quantity Table
| Category | Target | Notes |
|---|---|---|
| History | 100 | Largest library — parallels live race events across the full route |
| Thematic | 30 | Heroism, Pride, Future & Hope — emotional anchors of the broadcast |
| Traditions | 25 | Top 20 Comrades traditions explained and brought to life |
| Runner Stories | 75 | Elite to back-of-pack, diverse, emotionally variable |
| Geography | 15 | Five great hills + key course sections |
| Shout-Outs | Open | UGC-style, 10–20 seconds, families at home and at the finish |
History Inserts
Key Research Areas
| Moment | Year | Insert Angle |
|---|---|---|
| The First Race — Vic Clapham's founding vision | 1921 | |
| Hardy Ballington — The Interrupted Dynasty | 1933–1950 | |
| Wally Hayward — Longevity as Resistance | 1952–1988 | |
| Frances Hayward — Running Before Permission | 1958 | |
| Official Women's Category Introduced | 1975 | |
| Bruce Fordyce — First Win | 1981 | |
| The Fields Hill Moment — Fordyce vs de la Motte | 1983 | |
| Frith van der Merwe — The Record | 1988 | |
| The Big Five Medals Introduced | 2000 | |
| The 100th Running — No Spectators | 2021 | |
| Elena Nurgalieva — Twin Dynasty | 2000s | |
| Bongmusa Mthembu — The Modern Standard-Bearer | 2010s–present | |
| The Cutoff Gun — 106 Years of Heartbreak | Ongoing |
The Trigger Map — Director's Cue Sheet
| Race Trigger Point | Approx Time (SAST) | History Insert Cue | Insert Duration |
|---|---|---|---|
| Start gun — Durban | 05:30 | 1921 — The First Race | 90 sec |
| Cowies Hill (km 17–20) | 06:45 | Fordyce: The Cowies Hill strategy — the trap that destroys races before they start | 60 sec |
| Fields Hill (km 24–26) | 07:15 | 1983 — Fordyce vs de la Motte. The race turned on this hill. | 2 min |
| Hillcrest (km 33) | 07:45 | Hardy Ballington — The interrupted dynasty | 90 sec |
| Botha's Hill (km 38) | 08:00 | Wally Hayward — Still running at 45 | 2 min |
| Drummond (km 46) | 08:30 | Frith van der Merwe — The record that stood 28 years | 2 min |
| Inchanga (km 55) | 09:00 | Frances Hayward — Running before permission | 90 sec |
| Polly Shortts (km 72) | 10:30 | Fordyce — The Polly Shortts surge | 90 sec |
| Harrison Flats (km 78) | 11:00 | Elena Nurgalieva — The twins | 2 min |
| 12-hour gun | 18:00 | The cutoff — the history of the gun | 60 sec |
Sample Scripts
Thematic Inserts
The Three Themes
Heroism
10 inserts
Not stories about winning. Stories about the decision to not stop. The negotiation between body and will. The moment at km 75 when everything says stop — and the answer is yes anyway. Do not make these saccharine. The heroism in Comrades is unglamorous. It is a woman throwing up at the roadside and getting back up. Dignity in its most stripped-down form. Find characters. Find the moment of almost. Find the yes.
Pride
10 inserts
The Comrades Marathon is the only event in the country where all of South Africa genuinely seems to be in the same place. Not a vague montage of rainbow nation imagery. Specific. Concrete. Diverse. The family from Soweto whose son is running his first Comrades. The Afrikaner farmer from the Karoo who has run every year since 1987. The Zulu runner who runs in traditional dress. The Indian family who sets up the same support table at the same corner every single year. The sign in isiZulu that, when translated, is devastating in its love.
Future & Hope
10 inserts
These inserts look forward. The teenagers watching the race and imagining themselves in it. The 8-year-old at the finish line who will run this race in 20 years. The disabled athlete who changed the definition of finishing. The coach who trains kids in a township with no track and no shoes and a starting line and a belief.
Best-in-Class References
Sample Script
Tradition Inserts
The Top 20 Traditions
| # | Tradition | Insert Brief |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | The cock crow at the start | |
| 2 | Chariots of Fire — the start anthem | |
| 3 | The Big Five medals (Gold, Wally Hayward, Silver, Bill Rowan, Bronze) | |
| 4 | The Vic Clapham medal (finisher's medal) | |
| 5 | The cutoff gun at 12 hours | |
| 6 | The green number — 10 finishes | |
| 7 | The black number — first-time finisher | |
| 8 | The Fordyce Tap | |
| 9 | The 12-hour bell | |
| 10 | Support point culture | |
| 11 | Water stations and hydration | |
| 12 | The finish-line hug | |
| 13 | The blanket and the chair | |
| 14 | The Robert Mtshali Award | |
| 15 | The night-before pasta dinner | |
| 16 | Supporters' tables at specific corners | |
| 17 | The timing chip and the obsession with splits | |
| 18 | Two Oceans as preparation — the unwritten rule | |
| 19 | The Comrades tattoo culture | |
| 20 | Post-race recovery area |
Best-in-Class References
Sample Script
Runner Stories
Story Categories
| Category | Description | Target |
|---|---|---|
| Elite Race Stories | Telete Dejane vs Pit Visma. The rivalry. The record possibilities. Pre-race tactical framing. | 10 |
| Elite Human Stories | Who are the elites off the course? Their training, their home, what they do between races. | 10 |
| Green Number Stories | Runners achieving their 10th finish. The journey. The first time vs the tenth. The family at the line. | 10 |
| First-Timers | The terror and wonder of a first Comrades. The training, the doubt, the day. | 8 |
| Bus Drivers | The unofficial pacers who carry hundreds of people to their medals. The unsung. | 5 |
| Back-of-Pack | Racing not for medals but against the gun. The final hour. | 8 |
| Comeback Stories | DNF'd, got injured, or had something go wrong — and came back. | 8 |
| Funny & Absurd | The runner who dresses as a rhino. The man running with his daughter on his back for 1km. The absurdity only a 90km race produces. | 6 |
| Supporter Stories | The families and communities who make the race happen from the roadside. | 10 |
Key 2026 Story Subjects — Research Brief
Telete Dejane (Ethiopia)
Pre-race profile. The record she is chasing. Her preparation. What Comrades means to her. Film in training environment if access can be secured.
Pit Visma (confirm 2026 entry)
If competing: the rivalry narrative. A South African favourite against the international field. Head-to-head story.
Bongmusa Mthembu
The defending champion or perennial contender. His relationship with the race over time. What this year means to him.
"Dawsey" (confirmed insert — production to coordinate)
Getting his 10th finish. Green number. His kids at the line. This is a CONFIRMED insert. Source the footage, get family permissions, film pre-race. Tag to race bib for live shout-out match-up.
Story Finding Protocol
- Identify candidates through CMA entry data, running clubs, social media, and CMA contacts (Carel and Gareth — primary story identification contacts).
- Pre-interview all candidates (30 minutes, recorded). Not every candidate yields an insert.
- Film selected subjects in their natural environment: home, training route, work, family.
- The insert must feel found, not manufactured. If it feels like a corporate inspiration video, it is wrong.
Sample Script
Geography Inserts
The Five Great Hills
| Hill | Location (up run) | What It Does | Insert Angle |
|---|---|---|---|
| Cowies Hill | km 17–20 | Early test. Runners arrive full of energy and go too hard. The hill that destroys races before they have started. | The trap. Why the fastest runners make their biggest mistake here. |
| Fields Hill | km 24–26 | Steep ascent (up run). Multiple switchbacks. Technically demanding. Historic race moments. | The hill as history. What this hill has witnessed. The 1983 moment. |
| Botha's Hill | km 37–40 | Long, grinding climb. The loneliness of this hill. The point where the body starts asking questions. | The mental wall. The conversation that happens inside a runner's head on Botha's Hill. |
| Inchanga / Drummond | km 46–55 | Halfway territory. Psychological turning point. The view. The descent. | Halfway: the mathematics of hope and the danger of the calculation. |
| Polly Shortts | km 72–75 | Last great climb. 18km from the finish. The race is made or broken here. The iconic moment. | The decisive hill. Where the race is won and lost. Fordyce. History. The surge. |
Additional Key Sections
| Section | Description | Insert Angle |
|---|---|---|
| Harrison Flats (km 77–82) | Deceptive false flat after Polly Shortts. Runners think the hard work is done. It is not. | False hope: the geography of the almost-finished. |
| 45th Cutting (km 82) | Famous descent. First view of Pietermaritzburg. The emotional unlock. | The moment the city appears. What that does to a runner's mind after 82km. |
| The Start — Durban city centre | 20,000 runners. Pre-dawn. The sound of feet on tarmac. | The atmosphere insert. Before the race exists, this is what it looks like. |
| The Finish — Pietermaritzburg stadium | The arrival. The clock. The cut-off. The gun. | The destination. The insert that airs in the final hour. |
Best-in-Class References
Sample Script
Shout-Outs
Production Spec
| Element | Specification |
|---|---|
| Duration | 10–20 seconds per shout-out |
| Format | Selfie-style video OR filmed by crew at support points |
| Collection window | Pre-race (uploaded via CMA platform) + race day (crew at key support points) |
| Consent | Written consent required. Minors require parental consent. |
| Tagging system | Each shout-out tagged to runner bib number. Director pulls by bib. |
| On-screen treatment | Lower-third: runner name + bib number. No heavy graphics. |
| Language | Accept all South African languages. Subtitle everything non-English. |
| Selection criteria | Emotional authenticity. If it feels coached or scripted, reject it. |
Social Media Call-Out Copy
Pre-Production Timeline
| Milestone | Target Date | Owner |
|---|---|---|
| Insert framework approved by CMA | End April 2026 | T+W + CMA |
| Runner story subjects identified and pre-interviewed | End April 2026 | T+W |
| History insert scripts drafted — first 30 | End April 2026 | T+W |
| Shout-out collection campaign live | 1 May 2026 | T+W + CMA Social |
| Tradition insert scripts approved | Mid May 2026 | T+W + CMA |
| Runner story filming complete | End May 2026 | T+W |
| History inserts rough cuts reviewed | End May 2026 | T+W |
| Geography inserts final cut | 1 June 2026 | T+W |
| All inserts locked and delivered for broadcast | 10 June 2026 | T+W |
| Director's Trigger Map finalised | 10 June 2026 | T+W Director |